Wednesday, 13 August 2014

show don't tell

WALT show don't tell to build the efferents your head 

kara’s arms were very muscular and his  muscle went over like a mountain  and every time he tensed his  muscles his veins popped out . Everytime someone sees his muscles they wonder “how did he get them so big...



  1. Kia ora Hone from Mrs Morgan-French. I have a good picture in my head of Kara flexing his enormous muscles and I have to wonder how did he get them so big? Tu meke.

  2. Hi Hone,I like the way you done all that suff.