Friday, 9 May 2014

My Best Holiday

WALT recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happened and how we felt.

In the  holidays  I helped my mum clean Hauora.  Me and mum got a ice-cream each the ice-cream was  nice  .  I helped my mum because she was the only one there.  First me and mum arrived at her work, it was creepy when we were the only ones there.  We were doing the rubbish.  I felt very scared.  After I helped Mum she gave me a fizzy drink.  It was awesome.


  1. Hone, what an outstanding effort in your writing this week! Well done. I love how you have used words like creepy and scared to show us how you felt! I bet your Mum was stoked to have you at work with her, especially when you were helping! What a good son!

  2. Hey hone,I like your writing it is very good effort and I hope you get on with it.